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[mabe85]

memory serves
emma x august (once upon a time)
3807 words

notes: for wooden swan week day 5, prompt: that's my problem... hoping (correcting canon).
summary: the habit is: everyone leaves her first; she never is the one to choose. until she is. and there are memories to cloud her decisions | after an unexpected detour to neverland, emma comes home

Comments

[sulopez]

Will you ever let us know who she chooses?
I really loved this story and how Emma described him and their whole dynamic. Geppetto being dead, though, was a huge blow to my heart. And the ending almost made me cry.
Good job! :)

[mabe85]

Why, thank you!
Sorry, though, for not being able to let you know who she chooses, eep!
Thanks for reading <3

[mabe85]

I do have tumblr.. But there are at least 2 irl people who found me and followed me there? So I don't want to publish this on tumblr?
So if you don't mind posting in on the blog, I would be very grateful... :D
Thank you so much!!! <3

[mabe85]

You're a peach <333

[nostalgichild]

Hi! Found your story, because a link was posted in the Wooden Swan tag on tumblr. I'm so glad I found this! I'm not much of a fanfiction reader but I absolutely love yours! So well written, so many emotions... awww perfect!

I also read your other August/Emma story and loved that too. I like your style and how you convey thoughts and feelings! So well done!

[mabe85]

That's very sweet of you!
Thank you so very much ♥

[mabe85]

Thank you so much. It means a lot coming from you ♥

[angelic37]

Awww, way to go breaking my heart! Love the open ending (especially how you got August to be brave, truthful and selfless), not sure about Geppetto being dead because damn I wasn't expecting that. And this + August not remembering Emma is way too sad for me to handle tho I wish it will happen in the show ;___;

[mabe85]

Thanks for reading it, love ♥