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[mabelablitity]

Title: Innocence Forgotten, Blood Spilled
Disclaimer: Don't own Glee or any of the characters, don't want to.
Rating: R
Waring: Rape, unbetaed
Word Count: 1387
Summary: Karkofsky and Azimio get payback and Finn never saw it coming.
A/N: Okay this is my first Glee fanfiction...ever. But I just had to fill this fucking prompt. It's two in the

Comments

[hyperemmalawlz]

*swallow* Holy crap woman. You just broke my heart. And for some reason I can't stop frowning-and-squinting

[discord2chaos]

I would love to see the aftermath. And a promt can never be filled enough.

[serendie]

I've read some of your writing and you most definitely could do this prompt justice! It doesn't matter that it's already been filled twice, the more fills the better! At the very least do the aftermath... don't be self-conscious about it :)

[mabelablitity]

Aw, thank you so much for commenting, I really appreciate it!

You should fill the prompt! I'd love to read your version of what happens! ...Yeah, I wrote it all at once at like...two in the morning and its my first glee fic so I wasn't feeling all that confident about my writing skills at the time.

Thank you so much!

[harry_fado]

God! This is so sad! But so well writ!
Finn really don't deserved it!
I'm crying now!
I don't know what more to say! .-.

XOXO =)

[mabelablitity]

Hahaha! Thank you! I'm sorry I made you cry but then again I find that very flattering.

[serendie]

Rape fics are kinda hard for me to read because of events in my past, but when authors like yourself write it in a dignified somber manner I actually enjoy them. Too many writers use rape as a kink and completely skips over the fact that rape is a very serious demoralizing act

[mabelablitity]

I really enjoyed your comment, thank you very much for posting it. I agree with you completely, too many writing do use rape as a kink and it makes it seem like...like a very important issue is treated like something that is acceptable.

Hurrah for Finn love, he's my favorite too. I didn't start the fic out thinking that it would end the way it did, Finn not understanding what was happening just sort of flew out of my fingertips and kind of shocked me. So I'm glad that you enjoyed that aspect of the story and that other have as well.

It was not implied slash, just friendship, just Finn having someone to comfort him and Kurt feeling horrible about the whole situation. I don't think that I could have stomached putting a paring in this fic. Aw, thank you so much. I was kind of worried about this so that means a lot to me.

[wickedistheword]

Thsi was bloody amazing. I may have filled the prompt, but I can never quite get myself to write the actual rape scenes, but if I could, it still not be as good as this [in that horrible way]. It was completley depressing, and I'm happy to see that i'm not the only one that writes Finn as he is- a child, not an egotistical jerk.

It was particaluarly heartbreaking on how all Finn could think of was how angry Burt would be about Kurt getting hurt. I bet they had the whole football team holding back Puck, judging by how pissed off and horrified he was. The last paragraph was particularly emotional, just with how Finn was reacting.

Over all a heart-wrenching story; good job.

[iawenbemerry]

This was... heartbreaking. This was so well written--have more faith in your writing skills!! Wow.