LJI Week 6: "Let's take a walk."

[mac_arthur_park]

i only took one pait of shoes

I never pack that light.

Pink ballet flats

It was supposed to be a long weekend,  Instead, it was my things under a leaky carport.

"I read your diary.  You're with him now.  You can never come back."

My shoes fill with rain.

This is the end.  And the beginning,

And I keep walking.

Comments

[halfshellvenus]

So concise, but so rich in the conflict and the choices it conveys!

[karmasoup]

Interesting to consider how the end is always the beginning. Dig it.