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LJI, week 8: My True North
Dec 05, 2019 01:20
Check the pockets. Sharpie. Box Cutter. Lip balm (Burt's Bees if possible). Wallet in back pocket. Keys...somewhere (
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static_abyss
December 8 2019, 03:49:00 UTC
I love your last two paragraphs. They were full of wonderful imagery. Beautiful.
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oxymoron67
December 9 2019, 17:10:07 UTC
I love the description of Dickie's Pants here. So true.
Lovely piece.
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beeker121
December 10 2019, 02:14:03 UTC
I also have a titanium spork, but it doesn't live in my bag anymore. Maybe it should I kind of miss the person who carried it. The you who carries one sounds awesome.
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rayaso
December 11 2019, 00:40:22 UTC
Any story that includes a spork is a winner. I loved your descriptions -- they were so funny, and the one about the bag was great.
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halfshellvenus
December 12 2019, 21:34:57 UTC
Keys can be cruel that way
So true. :)
I have love in my heart and a knife in my boot...and, occasionally, poison on my lips.
I love the human complexity shown in just these few words.
Lovely ending, both in meaning and phrasing.
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Lovely piece.
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So true. :)
I have love in my heart and a knife in my boot...and, occasionally, poison on my lips.
I love the human complexity shown in just these few words.
Lovely ending, both in meaning and phrasing.
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