LJI, week 8: My True North

Dec 05, 2019 01:20

Check the pockets.  Sharpie.  Box Cutter.  Lip balm (Burt's Bees if possible).  Wallet in back pocket.  Keys...somewhere ( Read more... )

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static_abyss December 8 2019, 03:49:00 UTC
I love your last two paragraphs. They were full of wonderful imagery. Beautiful.

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oxymoron67 December 9 2019, 17:10:07 UTC
I love the description of Dickie's Pants here. So true.

Lovely piece.

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beeker121 December 10 2019, 02:14:03 UTC
I also have a titanium spork, but it doesn't live in my bag anymore. Maybe it should I kind of miss the person who carried it. The you who carries one sounds awesome.

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rayaso December 11 2019, 00:40:22 UTC
Any story that includes a spork is a winner. I loved your descriptions -- they were so funny, and the one about the bag was great.

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halfshellvenus December 12 2019, 21:34:57 UTC
Keys can be cruel that way
So true. :)

I have love in my heart and a knife in my boot...and, occasionally, poison on my lips.
I love the human complexity shown in just these few words.

Lovely ending, both in meaning and phrasing.

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