Making It, completed fic

[macca44552]

Title: Making It

Pairings: John Lennon/Ringo Starr
Fandom: The Beatles 
Rating: R

Warnings: sexual situations, drug and alcohol use, language

Summary: Rory wouldn’t be half as intimidated by his friends if it wasn’t for the fact that he knows they’re good-that they’re going somewhere.

A/N: Written for ringoluver. I’ve been working on this for a few

Comments

[starkeyluvr]

I absolutely loved reading this! You write so well, I was entranced the whole time. nicely done!

[suburban_boho]

Wow! Nice work, dear. Very nice and if you hadn't said you hadn't ever written this pairing before, no one would be any-the-wiser. You handled it very well. ^_^

I have an insane amount of love for this little line Remembers how he could so easily become rendered stupid with pride as the audience called out his name, as pretty girls walked up to him after a show and asked, Are you Ringo? Remembers when Ritchie faded away and he became solidly Ringo. Ringo Starr.- Ahh...*satisfied hum*- I can't explain why (it'd be a three page tangent) but I just love that line because that's such a profound statement. Fairly simple but very profound.

Love the whole scene where he's drunk - so vivid in my mind, especially the bit about the circus in Spain. And the kiss- well, hot isn't strong enough a word. Smoldering and I-need-a-cold-shower-and-NOW kind of hot. Something along those lines.

And absolutely adored the end- again, very vivid. I love how John apologizes without actually apologizing. I can see the whole scene going down in my head

[larainefan]

Is this a one-shot, or part of something larger? Because even if it's a one-shot, I can tell how hard you worked on this! I enjoyed reading it, and John/Ringo aren't even a pair I normally ship but I still thought it was really good. I loved that line about living on alcohol and candy, that came across so brilliantly. You even got Iris in the story, so bonus points for that! :)

Oh, John and his mind-games, getting Ritchie's hopes up like that, then deflating them. When all along he probably knew he was having him soon into the band anyhow. I liked how you portrayed John and Paul coming to Butlin's to talk to Ringo.

[nirostob]

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