The Inevitable Closeness of Proximity (Harry/Draco, PG-13)

[maccadole]

Title: The Inevitable Closeness of Proximity
Author: maccadole
Pairing: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 3140
Content/warnings: mentioned forced bonding, bed sharing, bit of a poke while the other is asleep
Summary: One bed, two wizards and the first of seven nights.
Notes: carpemermaid, my precious friend. Happy birthday!! Thank you for being so

Comments

[shiftylinguini]

OMG!! OMG NIPPLES AND FINGER LICKING and omg bed sharing and bonding and so much forced proximity and NIPPLES! God, that was hot, and also hilarious ― their banter was so them, and I loved Harry’s POV, so much!!! Omg he was so put out, stuffing things in the closet and then Malfoy being all prim and composed and tailored pyjamas!!! Omg Malfoy, you posh wanker, I love it so much <3

Malfoy is appallingly gorgeous in this, I love the imagery you cast around him:

When he blinked his eyes open, almost half-asleep by that point, he saw Malfoy's hair had slid down to cover half his eye, the rest fanning out on the pillow. His mouth was a little open, and he looked... peaceful.

Oh gosh, such a luscious description, and so vivid, and the scar!! God I loved that, Harry watching Malfoy, and omgggggg this:

It worked for a moment, before his eyes betrayed him and wandered across Malfoy's pale skin to his nipple. It looked so small and soft, the little nub. All bright and pink. Overcome with the strangest burning in his veins, Harry lifted

[maccadole]

Omg this massive comment, Guini, you spoil me! I adore you! Thank you so much. Ahahah thank you for your pj expertise, too. I knew I wanted to put Draco in something ridiculous (that he most likely wore only because he had to share with Harry and wanted to rile him up) but with Harry I was at a loss, for some reason. And thank you for title help and for soothing my posting panic.

GHNNN I want to write you all the finger licking. ALL OF IT. We both need it in our lives.

I'm glad you liked it and thought the tentative-and-yet-not touching was erotic. I'm overjoyed!

[capitu]

This was awesome! I love how Draco made no complains about the bed and then he's sleeping practically on the very edge! LOL

But I love him, Draco, with his fitting and silky pyjamas and his and his nipples.

I love how obsessed Harry is with his nipples. Like, oh my god! \o/ Most fantastic. I love that Draco only wanted an apology for waking him up. Awwww. These two, I do love their banter. :) Most excellent!

[maccadole]

Thank you. :D I'm so thrilled you liked this, because I'm quite proud of it considering how rushed it was. (I wrote it in an evening and wanted to tear my hair out, lol.)

Draco is absolutely ridiculous, and I love him too.

[carpemermaid]

AHHHHHH YAAAAYYY!!!!!! *TACKLE HUG*

Omg the enticements, like, YES, my body is R E A D Y!!!! <333333 I'm snorting at the sequel title suggestion and flailing in excitement because silly!!! drarry!!!! :D :D :D

“Congratulations,” Malfoy said. “You can count.”

Omg, right off the bat the snark level is HIGH and I can feel his irritation through the screen hahaha! All while Harry is having a minor mental meltdown over the possibilities of Transfiguration and the fact that they have to share. I love how Draco is already resigned to their fate and that Harry is the one being exasperated and ~difficult hahaha! But then, ohhh, but then the tables turn and Draco gets all huffy!!!

Harry's dilemma over his comfort in the bed is hilarious. I'm actually howling at this: Harry wasn't quite up for being teased by that silk-clad twat right now.And then I loved the detail about Draco using magic to put away his clothes and Harry being all annoyed when he dug out his own folded pile and put them away, and him batting away Draco's offending robes

[carpemermaid]

...MORE because I can't be contained to one comment!

And then eeeeee, Draco being all tangled up with him when Harry woke up again! And this: In the first, soft light of dawn he looked... *swooooons* And then Harry is playing with his nipple and touching the scar and sahsdkjflhsafhdsjakfsah!!!! I'm with Guini, that was incredibly erotic and sadfhsdlakjfhdsalkfhdsa!

Malfoy's face looked a little pinched. “You better be apologising for waking me up, and not for any other sentimental reason.”

I love this so so so much!!!

“In that case, could you possibly inform me what your rough, uncouth hand is doing?”

OMFG *SNORT* !!!!!!! I've died of laughter again, RIP ME.

Harry quickly flicked a thumb over Malfoy's nipple, giving it a gentle pinch as his eyes grew wider.

“Oh,” Malfoy breathed. “So you're molesting me in my sleep, is that it?”

*INCOHERENT SCREAMING* !!!!!!!!!!!!!! HARRY. HAAARRRRYYYY. But also, Draco's reaction lmao!!!

“Ogle your artwork if you must, Potter, but don't you dare go all soppy. It's going to be a very long

[maccadole]

OH MY WORD, two comments?! Ohhh, you make me so happy! That is more than I expecteddddd. I wrote this in one evening - or, well, one hour the day before too - andddd I wasn't sure how much you'd like it. But you like it a loooooot!

You deserve all the cliché tropes, my darling. It was so much fun to write, and you indirectly made me remember why I love writing. Aaahhh, you liked the dialogue as well! dkfghdgh you can quote however much you want, I'm so honored you felt the need to do that. Oh gosh, you said so many kind things that I don't know how to process them.

OMFG *SNORT* !!!!!!! I've died of laughter again, RIP ME.

LOLOLOL, death by fic, and practically on your birthday no less! And yet somehow I'm not that sorry. ;D

[carpemermaid]

It was so much fun to write, and you indirectly made me remember why I love writing.

Yay yay yayyy!!! <333 Listen, you deserve allllll of the nice things in a comment!

Thank you again for my death by fic <3333

[smirkingcat]

that was great!
draco all high and mighty and then being the one afraid to proper lie down!
and harry moving so much and hard to wake draco up but even better was the LOOKING and SEEING and the noticing and then there was the nibble and the touching and fantastic work- bloody hot too!

[maccadole]

Yessss, the looking and seeing! Ahahaah. Gosh, thank you for your wonderful comment. Thank you for reading!

[_melodic_]

Ahhh this was so amazing!

Haha Harry's train of thoughts are so amusing. I adored the building of tension and all the descriptions of shoulder blades, silk shirts, sheets and hair fanned out on pillows.

Draco was so perfect and snarky and eeee I was just so happy when they finally kissed.

What a fantastic story!

[maccadole]

Ahahahhhh, thank you, my dear!!

This was so rushed but soooo much fun to write. It made me remember how fun writing is, no matter what genre it is. Oh gosh, I really want to write more.

I'm glad you liked it. :D I was nervous to post silly Drarry, but it seems to have gone over well. <3