I finished this little instalment about 12:30 this morning, so, since I am smart, I am going to do today's bit NOW. Here it is. It's the longest yet. I'm now sitting pretty on 7,130 words. Expect the next bit soon.
I'm liking this a lot, Mac! I think you've got a very interesting idea set up, and I'm excited to find out what happens next. I'm intrigued about Joan especially - why did he he say that the gang was all that had kept him together? Why didn't his dad stop him? gah, I have so many questions!! I'm having lots of fun reading this. Well done!
I'm trying to give Joan the "Gang is family" mindset, and they would've kind of taken care of him after his Mum died. I mean, half the members would have had one or both parents die, right? They know what to say
And his Dad didn't know. Maybe I should put a shout scene in this next bit.
I'm glad you're liking it! I'm typically amazingly self-conscious, so I think it's mediocre at the best of times.
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And his Dad didn't know. Maybe I should put a shout scene in this next bit.
I'm glad you're liking it! I'm typically amazingly self-conscious, so I think it's mediocre at the best of times.
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When did his dad find out? 0_o
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