Comments | macht_schnell: Merry Christmas to All

macht_schnell

Merry Christmas to All

Dec 29, 2010 20:20

“Merry Christmas to all, and to all an awesome night,” Gilbert crowed as he closed the thin book in his hands. A pair of blue eyes met his own as the book was lowered, and they were suspicious.

“That’s not how it goes, Bruder,” Ludwig said after a pregnant pause. “You changed the words.”

“It sounds better my way,” Gilbert said with a little ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

drcalvin December 30 2010, 01:55:54 UTC

\o/ There is a santa! and he also likes awesome! This story started out really cute, but it was the bit with Gilbert at the end that made it just perfect.

(And you use the cutest nickname ever for little Germany, wheee)

macht_schnell December 30 2010, 16:46:44 UTC

Because Santa -is- awesome ='D And totally exists. ;w; I'm glad you enjoyed it~

(And fank you my friend actually turned me on to the nickname ;w; )

absoluteforever December 30 2010, 04:04:29 UTC

WHAT IS THIS SHEER CUTENESS
Deep inside, I secretly adore Christmas fics. Especially awesome ones.

macht_schnell December 30 2010, 16:48:03 UTC

Christmas fics are supahcrazyfun~
-spins in circles until dizzy-

mykonos2 December 30 2010, 09:27:10 UTC

Damn, this was so cute... reminded me on my own childhood... I laughed so hard at the part with Austria xDD

"because he always got a stuffed dog" the... adorable... it's... killing me...

seriously, I have tears in my eyes from the cuteness ;___; I'm not exaggerating...

macht_schnell December 30 2010, 16:49:07 UTC

Yaaaay ;w;! Leave it to Austria to bring in the comedic relief XD
-gives tissues for dabbin' at eyes-
I'm so glad you enjoyed it ;w;

alouette_sparra December 31 2010, 03:59:23 UTC

Oh, this is adorable! I absolutely loved the last part with Prussia; that just made it. (And of course there's a Santa, silly German boys! His name is Finland and...)

Um... would you mind a little German crit, though?

macht_schnell January 1 2011, 01:18:52 UTC

Santa!Finland always comes through!

And be my guest - I haven't had German in years, so I'm quite rusty~

alouette_sparra January 1 2011, 06:03:03 UTC

:D Yay for Santa!Finland!

Anyhow... Bruder is correct for 'brother'. Brueder would be 'brothers'; the plural. Except it's actually Bruederchen for 'little brother'. Why so confusing, German? :P

And, yeah, if you don't have umlauts, you can just put an e after the letter that needs it. Which makes sense, since the umlaut used to be an e written over the letter needing the change in sound. And I'm about to geek out on you, so I'll shut up. XD