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[mackerel14409]

Pairing: YulTiSic

Rating: PG-13

Length: On-going

Genre: MackStyle

Comments

[regreted]

omg this style reads kind of awkward-uncomfortable, and i love it, its really neat.
YAY! for you.

<3

[mackerel14409]

Oh yeah? I was just trying to show how Yuri's mind works. Is it easy to understand?

Thank you for commenting.

[barawara]

Wow this is different yet oddly intriguing :)

I've never read stories with your style of writing...tht or I'm just slow lol
but I'm pretty sure it's bc you're writing is different
me like it!!!

(need sleep, as u can probably tell :-])

[barawara]

Oh and I totally knew the puppy was tiffany!!

[mackerel14409]

Hahaha. Yeah, I don't think I've ever read something with this sort of writing too.

Thanks!

[zelle13forever9]

I've been a silent reader of yours and may I say woah. This is different.

Honestly, I don't really get it. Why is Tiffany a puppy? Hahaha I mean I can totally see how she looks like a cute, adorable, lovable puppy and I thought it was some sort of metaphor at first but the paw thing totally threw me off there. Haha

But I'm interested and that's what's important. Hoping to read more from ya :))

[mackerel14409]

Hahahah. Don't forget that I'm reading in Yuri's point of view so everything can be a little vague. I love PuppyFany.

Thanks for commenting.

[driftaway143]

Am I the only one who's a little confused?

[mackerel14409]

Confused??? What's wrong?

[driftaway143]

I'm just a little confused

I kinda get the outline of it but, like the person below me said, I think it'll get clearer as it progresses

[mackerel14409]

Okeys. My bad let me fix this up.

[raplaplacp]

It's a bit choppy and just a little confusing but it's good. You could have been a little more descriptive but I guess you will make everything make sense later? I hope so anyways. Keep it up Mack Attack~

[mackerel14409]

Thanks. Thanks. Thanks.