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You reap what you sow

Apr 11, 2007 15:08

Title: You reap what you sow
Author: Mackeygenius
Pairing: Peter/Nathan
Rating: Nc-17
A/N: Written for the Spring Hiatus Ficathon, for cloud_sprite, the prompt was: Peter is in trouble when Nathan finds him.
Thanks to mf_luder_xf and lunais_cross for the amazing betaing.

( Nathan wants to play the grown up? Fine. He'll play the brat. )

peter/nathan, heroes

Comments 8

ivy_b April 11 2007, 18:26:42 UTC

LOL, Nathan's last line made me laugh. Interesting way of making Peter see your point of view, but it seems to have worked.

mackeygenius April 12 2007, 12:05:00 UTC

Glad you liked it.

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mackeygenius April 12 2007, 11:55:18 UTC

Me too.

lostandalone22 April 12 2007, 08:20:13 UTC

This is very nice. I love the idea of Nathan punishing Peter.

I'm not particularly fond at the idea of learning you took a swan dive from a roof of a building because you thought you could fly.

Bwahaha, Nathan knows the future.

mackeygenius April 12 2007, 12:04:32 UTC

It was unintentional. At first, I was thinking about the effects of some drug and when I reread what I wrote, I laughed my ass off so I decided to keep it.

mystery_sock April 13 2007, 23:03:40 UTC

Hilarity! I love this!

elyssadc April 16 2007, 04:18:28 UTC

This bit:

I bet you've never been harder in your life; what does it feel like, Pete? Knowing you're getting off on your brother's fingers. Feel any shame yet?"

is so hot it nearly melted my eyeballs. Mmmmmmmmmmm.