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FILLED: Pitter-Patter, 1/2 prufrock_26 June 4 2012, 20:21:34 UTC
A/N: This is...sort of different from what you probably wanted. It's certainly different from what I'd intended. But here it is, anyway ( ... )

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Re: FILLED: Pitter-Patter, 2/2 prufrock_26 June 6 2012, 18:39:52 UTC
I'm so looking forward to being old and crabby...I'll sit on the porch across from Dean and we'll have a contest to see who can scare more kids.

But see, this is what fandom does to me: I never thought altitude sickness could be funny. And then it was late at night and the idea of Dean hunched up on the side of the road refusing to give in to the nauseating power of mountains was suddenly pretty hilarious. My brain, man...

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Re: FILLED: Pitter-Patter, 2/2 mad_server June 6 2012, 16:07:38 UTC
Bahhhhhhh. The mumbling knees! The quiet circles! The porch where Dean can yell at kids! The yoga breathing! The sad-limp-celery lips! Ohhh my.

I love how unaffected Sam is by the altitude, and how perceptive he is about Dean's situation, AND HOW HE'S GOING TO BUY DEAN A HOUSE. Loooooves his Dean.

Thank you thank you thank you! I feel all spoiled and happy.

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Re: FILLED: Pitter-Patter, 2/2 prufrock_26 June 6 2012, 18:53:28 UTC
Aww, you're welcome. Thanks for suggesting it, because inflicting my own memories of mountain trips on Dean was dead therapeutic. Like, I might even have to revisit this one sometime. *thinks deep thoughts about mountains and tummies*

Sam *would* be the kind of aggravating person who wouldn't have any troubling adjusting to the altitude change. But he'd know what to do anyway - unlike Dean, who just assumes altitude sickness is for babies and The Weak.

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Re: FILLED: Pitter-Patter, 2/2 mad_server June 6 2012, 20:06:32 UTC
I might even have to revisit this one sometime. *thinks deep thoughts about mountains and tummies*

*happysigh*

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Re: FILLED: Pitter-Patter, 2/2 prufrock_26 June 8 2012, 04:02:49 UTC
OP here and, wow, so lovely and dark all at once. Love your OC's voice and the description of the footprints. Also love the flashback and Sam's reaction to Dean's plight.

Thank you so much for filling this!

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Re: FILLED: Pitter-Patter, 2/2 prufrock_26 June 8 2012, 04:13:25 UTC
Oh yay! You're so welcome - I'm overjoyed to hear it worked for you (even with the outside POV). Thank you for the lovely (and eerie) prompt!

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Re: FILLED: Pitter-Patter, 2/2 rbmi_fan June 8 2012, 15:15:01 UTC
So awesome. I adore that you did outsider POV. That poor maid. The descriptions of the motel room from her POV were amazing and slightly creepy. And then that tiny little glimpse into what happened that tells us so much about what's going through Sam's head. ♥ ♥

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Re: FILLED: Pitter-Patter, 2/2 prufrock_26 June 8 2012, 19:59:56 UTC
Thanks! I couldn't resist the idea of some poor uninvolved person stumbling on that particular scene of horror....

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