Comments | mad_for_jorja: The Elephants are Restless

mad_for_jorja

The Elephants are Restless

Dec 29, 2007 13:52

A/N: I hope everybody will get the thing with the elephants, and specifically what Grissom’s elephant represents.

Once again, the idea of Sara with body piercings first intrigued me when I read fics by Vegawriters, specifically chapter 2 (What the Butterfly Saw) from the Into the Looking Glass series.

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cr1 December 29 2007, 20:24:07 UTC

Well...err..drool...thud...
That was one of the most incredably hottest scenes that I have ever read, I need a very very cold shower now.

mad_for_jorja December 29 2007, 21:15:59 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it. It is by far the most explicit thing I've written and I was nervous about posting it.

I need to read through this again ... vegawriters December 29 2007, 20:57:38 UTC

... unfortuntately, my house is full of people, including a two year old, so I haven't been able to really give this attention, but I wanted to give a thank you and bow humbly. To know that I was able to inspire things is awesome.

Re: I need to read through this again ... mad_for_jorja December 29 2007, 21:19:21 UTC

Well, think about it this way. When I think about any type of nipple piercing, I think about you. LOL.

Re: I need to read through this again ... vegawriters December 29 2007, 21:28:11 UTC

*laughs*

Now THAT is a compliment!

cancsifan December 29 2007, 21:01:27 UTC

This was ridiculously hot. Wow. And I love the interjection of the elephants into the scenes. Excellent.

mad_for_jorja December 29 2007, 21:20:15 UTC

I'm very glad you liked it. Yea, those elephants just kept popping in my head everywhere.

zequins December 30 2007, 00:16:17 UTC

Wonderful story, and I loved this chapter and I love nipple piercings. I've always wanted to believe Sara has one hehe. Looking forward to read more.

mad_for_jorja December 30 2007, 04:40:57 UTC

Yea, gotta love those nipple piercings! I'm happy to hear you liked this chapter, I was nervous posting it.

wander52 December 30 2007, 03:57:21 UTC

HOT, HOT, HOT!!!! I knew you had posted the second chapter and couldn't read it on my cell phone....darn!!! You did such a great job on this...I almost grabbed my oven mitts again....puter was getting really overheated....I can't wait til you post the next chapter...hope it's soon.

mad_for_jorja December 30 2007, 04:43:27 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I will try to post the next (and last) chapter on Monday. It will be about "the morning after."