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mad_for_jorja

The Elephants are Restless

Dec 31, 2007 14:08

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The first thing Sara saw when she woke up was the lower part of Gil Grissom’s face. He was lying on his back, mouth slightly open… still fast asleep. Her head rested on his upper arm and her right arm and leg were thrown across his body. She touched his face softly. She didn’t want to wake him, but she just couldn’ ( Read more... )

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firthivated December 31 2007, 20:56:51 UTC

This was a great ending. It was very IC for both Gil and Sara. Loved, loved, loved it, especially the last line. Very cute!!!

mad_for_jorja January 1 2008, 15:30:55 UTC

Thanks for your kind words. I'm very glad that you enjoyed the story.

cancsifan December 31 2007, 22:24:15 UTC

Loved this. Great ending and the annoyed elephant in the corner is too funny. Thanks.

mad_for_jorja January 1 2008, 15:32:14 UTC

I originally had a different line at the end, but it was kinda ominous, and I wanted a happy ending. Glad you liked it.

chauncey10 December 31 2007, 22:54:42 UTC

Thank you for writing this story...and remember please keep writing more, (my muse is currently on sabbatical, hopefully she ran off with Grissom and is having a good time) because right now, all I can do is read. I loved this story..:) chauncey

mad_for_jorja January 1 2008, 15:34:56 UTC

Well, I don't write much, and nothing new have popped into my head, so who knows when I will write again. Also I have to go back to work tomorrow so will be short on time. But if I get inspired I'll post again. Maybe my muse ran of with Sara. LOL.

wander52 December 31 2007, 23:25:43 UTC

You have a definite talent...I sure hope you're going to write a follow up....I had a grin on my face when I checked my cell while I was out and found you'd posted another chapter... Please write something again soon.

Happy New Year!!!

mad_for_jorja January 1 2008, 15:37:11 UTC

Happy New Year to you too! I don't know whether there will be an sequel. I don't write much, but I was on vacation and this little fic just popped into my head. So lets hope something new pop soon.

madonna19 January 1 2008, 10:19:58 UTC

Happy new year. I was looking forward for the last chapter. I really like it and recommend it on the ytdat. I hope thats ok. please wrote more. kerstin

mad_for_jorja January 1 2008, 15:40:25 UTC

Oh thanks a lot for recommending this fic. I'm honored.
At the moment my muse has not supplied any more ideas, but hopefully she will recover from her hangover soon and hit me over the head with a new fic.
Happy New Year.