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Oct 18, 2008 16:13

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Disclaimer: I don’t own anything.

A/N: My take on The End.

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“Well maybe he couldn’t. Maybe he needed her to leave him.”

Sara felt her heart constrict. Her arms and hands started to tingle as adrenalin was release throughout her body.

“Who're we talking about right now?”

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ladylobo2 October 18 2008, 22:53:01 UTC
As much as it hurts and sucks that's exactly what I took from this eppi also! She's leaving it up to him and he just hasn't realized that he's ready to leave. However, I'm concerned for the return of Lady Heather in 9x5! Thanks for your drabble! Great job!

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mad_for_jorja October 18 2008, 22:59:29 UTC
Thanks for your comment. I'm hoping that 9x05 is actually a redeeming episode for Heather, where she will call Grissom on his s**t and force him to eventually see the light. I can dream, right?

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fixomnia October 18 2008, 23:24:13 UTC
I'm hoping for the same thing! As great as it is for Sara to re-establish herself, the characters have such alchemy. And if anyone can get past Grissom's mental smokescreen (i.e. B.S.) and make him admit that he has the right to feel and act upon his feelings, it's Heather. Interesting viewing ahead.

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mad_for_jorja October 19 2008, 21:37:42 UTC
Interesting viewing indeed! Let's hope it all works out for GSR, otherwise I'm not going to be a happy fan.

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buffyangellvr23 October 19 2008, 03:29:48 UTC
I'm hoping like aliaras said, that they'll end happy but I do think the fic is kinda the point they're at now. Nice job.

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mad_for_jorja October 19 2008, 21:40:56 UTC
Thanks for your comment. Yes, we are all hoping for a happy ending, but unfortunately in canon universe Sara is on her own at the moment.

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poppie_lee October 19 2008, 12:17:36 UTC
This was a lovely little piece. Bitter sweet and full of emotion. I agree with your take on Sara leaving and I'm glad TPTB let Grissom be the one to mess it up. He has to be the one to fix it now, as it should be. On your knee's Grissom and beg!!
Keep the Faith!

Poppie x x x.

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mad_for_jorja October 19 2008, 21:42:44 UTC
Yea, he was being typical passive-aggressive Grissom. I wanted to smack him and was actually impressed with Sara's self control for not throwing something very heavy at him!

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csikathy October 19 2008, 17:23:29 UTC
I'd pay money to watch Grissom beg.

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mad_for_jorja October 19 2008, 21:43:12 UTC
Oh, yea, me too! It is about time that he begs.

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csikathy October 19 2008, 22:24:34 UTC
I had some impure thoughts related to begging that didn't involve punishment.

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A/N sidlefan October 19 2008, 21:15:00 UTC
I too love GSR, but I must agree with your interpretation of the episode...If Sara could hear me right now, I would say, "Go Sara, far, far away, because you deserve better."

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Re: A/N mad_for_jorja October 19 2008, 21:43:54 UTC
I totally agree. She should just go on with her life and be happy.

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