God, I really love this series. Thank you for writing it, and for doing such a fantastic job with it.
One small note - right towards the end, here:
It's over far too soon....
The break in tense really threw me out of the story - that kind of thing doesn't usually create a problem for me but here it really did and I don't see why it was necessary for mood or whtever. I just thought I'd mention it in case you were planning to redraft or assemble these when you're done with the whole series.
I love this series. I was hooked on both Dead Like Me and Stargate Atlantis, so this this is a perfect crossover. I cn'twait to see where all this is going.
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"It's hard to be dead and well-adjusted," Ronon said with a shrug.
Words to um...live by...*G*. This is great, I can't wait to read more and hopefully Kolya will die painfully.
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One small note - right towards the end, here:
It's over far too soon....
The break in tense really threw me out of the story - that kind of thing doesn't usually create a problem for me but here it really did and I don't see why it was necessary for mood or whtever. I just thought I'd mention it in case you were planning to redraft or assemble these when you're done with the whole series.
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We're not planning a redraft, but thanks for pointing it out.
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Also, I can't find it now, but somewhere there's a "brining" instead of bringing. *g* Gave me a typo-induced smile.
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We've gone over them so many times but we're always bound to miss one or two typos. ;) *g*
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