Holmes curses quietly to himself as the barrel of his gun 'click-clicks', registering the empty chambers. Watson's comment about saving bullets goes unheard because he's listening very carefully. Blackwood's voice as it trailed off was canting right, but the soft footfall teasing at the edge of his hearing are to his left. It only takes a moment
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I don't know what you mean by "amateurishly" filled. That was amazing! I could actually feel the pull on Holmes as he had to decide between what he knew was right and what he wanted. It was a very palpable emotion, and it was a very, very, nice story to read.
I thank you immensely for the enjoyment this story gave me, and Happy Writing!
~Shatan
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