The Moon - Chapter 3

[mad_stalin_69]

Author: mad_stalin_69
Title: The Moon
Chapter: 3/?
Rating: AU; sci-fi setting; NC - 17;
Pairings: Kaoru/Kyo
Warning: language, angst, character death (!!!), horror, drama and grammar fails;
Summary: If they pronounce your name, if you are put on the list, if you are the one who’s been chosen - you have to go. Even if the only thing that is waiting for

Comments

[mimichan_rebel]

First off I love you, second this is perfect, third I have no idea of what's going on. But. I love this. I could careless if I'm the only one who reads this, but I really like this, it's so good, please keep writing this masterpiece.

[mad_stalin_69]

I'm sure it's not a masterpiece, but I'm really very happy you like it so much ^^ Gives me a lot of confidence to write this story :P I have to know somebody likes it... othervise there would be no point in posting if nobody reads and enjoys it... :)
^^

[assa_bnw]

It was anything but boring! It was just a bit short for my taste.. I really can't imagine finding myself in such a small planet as I am used to vast territories and all that jazz, and then you are just stuck at the Moon fealing too big and too small at the same time. This Kaoru, I don't really know what to think about him. I hope you won't mind a bit of criticism - the only off putting thing is wining Kyo, even though his motives are clear..

[mad_stalin_69]

Glad to hear

[assa_bnw]

Long answers are as good as long chapters are;)
And btw what's the films title? as the only thing about being solo on the planet that comes to mind is 'The petite prince' but I'm absolutely sure that it's not the case ^^v

[mad_stalin_69]

Long chapters and looooong comments are my favorites :DDD lol
It's 2009 movie called Moon :) A very good one, makes you think a little bit after you finish watching - my favorite type :P

[tcharlatan]

HOMG, this chapter was so... mmmn... -claustrophobic-. Definitely not boring, it just gave the impression of the emptiness and the horrible tight, blank space he has to live in. It feels like a build-up to madness, I think ^_^

(Also, sorry I took so long; I haven't been online much lately, between baking many pies, watching X-Files, and getting my leg tattooed @_@)

[mad_stalin_69]

I found your observations rather... interesting :))) As much as I want to, I'd rather not comment :P I want to keep suspence (if there's any) present in the story :D I hope nobody has a real idea where this is going :P

What a weird combination - pies and tatoos :D lol I'm so jealous you can spoil yourself :O My one week holiday is still a month away :(((((
Have fun :DDD ^^

[tcharlatan]

XD Yes, suspense is definitely present! I'm waiting on the edge of my seat (kind of sideways, at the moment) to see where you're going to go with all this.

Haha, yeah... I have strange passtimes, every now and then. I have to squeeze in tattoo sittings on the weekends, and I've been saving up for it for quite a while, but it's aaalllmmmooosssttt done, so I'm super excited! I'm out of school, so I don't really get holidays anymore...

[mad_stalin_69]

Hope it will be surprising :D I'm worried as it is if this story is any good :D I'm a hopeless perfectionist >_<"

It sounded as if you have lots of free time :P So I wrongly assumed you're on holiday :P I started studying for a short time, so studying and working during summer sucks!! Maybe that's why I finally started this story - I need a distraction and some fun :P lol

[eilonwe2]

this reminds of some b-movie i saw once where this guy who's up on the moon goes nuts from the isolation. but yeah, poor thing. It's not like someone who likes solitary and who chose it. He's been someone famous a people person and it's going to be so much more difficult for him than most people.

though I'm wondering if his petite size won't be a blessing. I'm hoping so. and here's hoping from some really super-smutty wet-dreams!!