The Moon - Chapter 7

[mad_stalin_69]

Author: mad_stalin_69
Title: The Moon
Chapter: 7/?
Rating: AU; sci-fi setting; NC - 17;
Pairings: Kaoru/Kyo
Warning: language, angst, character death (!!!), horror, drama and grammar fails;
Beta reader: lurks92
Summary: If they pronounce your name, if you are put on the list, if you are the one who’s been chosen - you have to go. Even if the only thing that is

Comments

[mimichan_rebel]

I hate kauro and Die can go fuck himself. *cuddles kyo* fucking asshole, other than that another great chapter, but Die is a slut, and a horrible friend and shouldn't even be considered one. Kauro is a no good coward who needs to grow a dick. The story is moving wonderfully.

[mad_stalin_69]

Honestly, I didn't expect such strong reactions! :O I kind of justify Kaoru a litte... :P
Thanks ^^ I wasn't very pleased with this chapter, but I'm glad you liked it :)))

[eilonwe2]

oh so now I know why die was acting so strangely. yeah, I can see where kyo's obsession with kaoru would just be this big fat neon-pink elephant in the room.

I think in a way, Kaoru was right in his lie. It was what Kyo needed to keep him sane, and yet that "hope" turned to obsession, to an imagined return of affection that was so much deeper and more strongly felt than reality. And now, all his hopes lay shattered. The one constant thing, he'd had to look forward to has been crushed under the bitter heel of Die's jealousy. And Die seems so fucking cold, so willing to let Kyo just .... blow away on the breeze. Doesn't he realize that with as much shit as kyo's been through that that same urge to say "fuckit" and just take off his helmet and die in the void, might be there again

[eilonwe2]

oh and PS.... if you don't write more of this I might have to hurt you. just giving you a heads up.

besides I'll bribe you.. cookies, chocolate, even a drabble with the pairing and prompts of your choice. though the only thing I request is that you don't ask me to write heavy violence or rape scenes. thanks.

[mad_stalin_69]

Hey! :) I enjoyed reading all your comments! ^^ You made my morning that day :D ^^ lol
Yes, Kaoru does feel guilty, but he would never choose a friend over his lover :( He's been with Die for six years already..
I will, I will!!! Don't hurt me!!!! :O It just takes me a lot of time to update, I've been busy and had some health problems, so there was barely any time to write :( But I won't abandone this story, I really like writing it ^^
Mmm, cookies ^^ :D

[rechino_reno]

Kyo-kun I feel for you *hug tight*
now i understand why Kaoru looks distance and why Die so cold but he's no right to try get rid of Kyo like they not a good friends *kick*
Totchi please help Kyo!
Nice update and cannot wait for the next ^_^b

[mad_stalin_69]

Thanks ^^
I hopefully I'll manage to update sooner next time.. I've been very busy >_<