Chosen One - Chapter 18

[madbottoms]

 Title: Chosen One - Chapter 18
Summary: Our favourite tortured boys are back in this third and final instalment in which they try to outrun Hell.
Notes: See chapter 1 for disclaimer warnings and related info. Apologies for the delay in posting this next chapter. Enjoy!

18

Silver-tongued Devil

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JACK

My heart pounds at the thought of leaving

Comments

[lilferret]

I want to believe Gray, but I can't.

[madbottoms]

You have good instincts then. :)

[hatorl]

Wow!! I made a trip so I didn't read or comment as I usually did, but now I catch up with everything and.... so many feelings!!!
I'm glad that they passed the "I want that Jack hate me fase" even if the relationship is still complicated.
John is a mess!! He really believes He can defeat the evil of all evils? But now, it doesn't matter if his plan is good or not, or if Ianto's plan of run away is good either, because Gray's appearence may change everything.
I don't trust in Gray but I think Maggie is in real danger, even if angels are protecting Jack's family, they didn't made a good job in this story.
Oh! every chapter creates so many emotions in me! Love to read you again. And I can't wait to see what happen next!
Amazing chapter as usual.

[madbottoms]

Brilliant! Sounds like you really enjoyed it then.

There are many conflicts at the moment between all of them with emotions running high. And things are about to get worse.

Cheers and next part up soon.