please comment

[maddy_18]

Spent whole morning working on this so it isn't perfect. Please naman, comment kayo! :D I wanna know what people think. And if I should cut this one into two chapters instead of just one.

One :

Our fairytale started when my brother Max brought him over for dinner, our cousins were there too. I would always see David in the house, he was my brother'

Comments

[trinawee]

ang ganda =] pramis.

[anonymous]

aba'y npkaganda naman nito bubblegum....ahahah! :D

[moolove]

Uy, ang swerte mo na nangyari yan sa iyo!ü

[supeerr]

story lang po yan.ü

[moolove]

Oh. Hahaü Ganda parin.
Ang stupid ko. :))

[maddy_18]

Naging spokesperson kna si trina noh? :))

[auraroo]

Two chapters siguro. Another chapter na yung nasa lake sila. Suggestion lang =) I like it so farrr.. tuloy mo pa ba? ^_____^

[maddy_18]

thanks sa suggestion.ü opo, itutuloy ko pa :D

[joan28]

bubblegum...tuloy moh pah ung ung story..pleeeaaasssshhh... ;D