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ex_nadeshiko480 September 3 2008, 22:45:56 UTC
No reunion till Friday?!
Okay, I guess I can wait...Wait, then when Friday comes, I'm gonna be sitting by the computer all day. Dagnabbit!

This is where Ahamo's been! Okay, it's official: I really don't like him now! I don't care if he was working for the Order, he left DG all alone during a time of crisis for goodness sake!

So, did the Order orchestrate this whole thing or is something out of their control?

With Ahamo doing Order work and Cain possibly being held by them, DG, Az, Raw, and Glitch have got to be told if something like this ever happens again.

Can't wait for the next bit!

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maddycain September 3 2008, 22:50:45 UTC
To be fair, when Ahamo left the City, he did not know that his daughter was about to be widowed OR that there was going to be an invasion attempt.

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ex_nadeshiko480 September 3 2008, 23:32:55 UTC
I know, but still, he should've thought he'd do something to assure that it may have been all a part of the Order's plan or that there was something fishy about him being sent out there to get Cain when this happens but nooooooooooooooooooooo! He has to stick it out and follow orders. *pht!*

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erinm_4600 September 3 2008, 22:51:52 UTC
Awww... *squishes Ahamo*

Honey, I know exactly how you feel.... Really. You'll get no pressure from me ;)

*passes cookies*

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cassandrarayne September 3 2008, 22:54:14 UTC
This is my favorite line:

“All right? All right?” Anger rose in Cain’s chest like a living thing. He seized Ahamo by the lapels. “How all right can she be with a dead husband and an invasion attempt?”

Cain is always so controlled and he just loses it here....I can picture it in my head.

Thanks for the update note, it helps keep things in perspective....looking forward to tomorrow & Friday!

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purplerhino September 3 2008, 23:04:40 UTC
I'm still holding to my theory.

I don't like Ahamo either way.

I like how you directed Cain's anger. And the mistrust of just about everyone. Was I the only one who noticed supposedly Ahamo was sent to that post BEFORE the invasion? Before it failed? If they were planning on sending Cain back disgraced, would Ahamo have bothered picking him up. Something is rotten in the state of Denmark.

Friday? Oh well, we've hung on this far.

When he gets back Cain should make sure the central switchboard has a special clearance for important callers. Or fire the switchboard operator.

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catyuy September 3 2008, 23:13:26 UTC
"Anytime anybody starts wondering where I am, they immediately become distracted and forget what they were about to ask. They don’t notice my absence, and when I return they won’t remember that I haven’t been there all along."

Oh thank Ozma. I was hoping for a good reason why no one noticed he was AWOL and you've given one.

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