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Bubblegum & Candied Dreams (2/2) (Jeff Skinner/Jared Staal) (R)

Jan 26, 2012 23:28

Title: Bubblegum & Candied Dreams
Artist: FanMix by Hilly (this was written for hittheshowersbb)
Sainted Betae: chica_charlie for the inspiration, sheesusnat and noidealtype for the review & revision assistance.
Genre: Slash, Implied Het
Pairing: Jeff Skinner/Jared Staal (Carolina Hurricanes, Charlotte Checkers)
Rating: R
Wordcount: 13,960
Disclaimer: This is fiction, ergo, it is not fact.
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rating: r, big bang: bubblegum & candied dreams, player: jeff skinner, fandom: hockey, team: carolina hurricanes, player: jared staal, pairing: skinner/staal(bb!j), team: charlotte checkers

Comments 6

belial January 27 2012, 12:41:23 UTC

this is so ridiculously adorable. the 'Canes aren't even my team, but I'm sitting in my chair beaming a smile like a moron.

Best ever - the interaction of the Staal brothers. They're ridiculous. Parker and the blue dolphin sex toy? Died laughing.

Overall, a great job. Thank you for this!

marienne_made January 28 2012, 05:32:48 UTC

Thanks for reading!

It's such a great pairing. I ended up writing this because I was originally prompted for E!Staal/Skinner fic and just couldn't get my head around it in a "real world" setting, so this is where it went from there.

PARKER IS A STAAL, HE IS NOT GIVING UP HIS NEW FRIEND FOR ANYTHING!! (Tanya was not amused)

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marienne_made January 28 2012, 05:29:49 UTC

Thanks for your help with this!!

The scariest/best part? I've poked around, and you can actually get a dolphin vibrator.

snowcrazed January 28 2012, 05:09:16 UTC

You know you've got something amazing going when your reader hits the end of the fic and goes "wait, no, no, you can't stop there, I WANT MORE!"

This is absolutely adorable!

marienne_made January 28 2012, 05:26:43 UTC

Aw, I'm glad you liked it!! Thanks for reading!

Love these hockey boys together! love_baseball May 17 2012, 11:41:08 UTC

You did so, so great with this - adorable, incredible and I can just imagine where this could go. The Staal brothers are too much. But Parker's blue dolphin vibrator still has me smiling a mile wide. And Jeff's version of mistletoe etiquette, "I thought there was an obligation for tongue, if you're not, you know, strangers." is one of the best. Your imagination is only exceeded by your fine writing of these boys falling so beautifully in love. It's wonderful that they are not afraid at all; they know the risks; they know they have to keep it out of the press (at least for a while.) But their joy of being together is so evident, I could imagine a sequel taking them a few years and trophies and a Stanley Cup later when they become the first NHL 'couple' to publicly come out. What better boys to do it?