fic: you, appearing [eleven/rose]

[madeelly]

you, appearing. eleven/rose. pg. romance/angst. They dance for a while, the music guiding them along the dance floor. She never looks down once - he guides her perfectly. She can see his eyes, these beautiful seafoam green eyes, so sad and so old and looking straight into her soul. 1491 words.

Comments

[firstofoct]

How heartbreaking! I love the bit when Rose found out that it was the Doctor, but her pain when he left! :( I do wish that he had given Rose a bit of a bit of hope for her future or a goodbye, but then again the Doctor's never been so great with those...

Lovely job. Thanks for writing this.

[madeelly]

Thank you so much! I feel like the Doctor would have given in to wanting to see her, but as soon as he did he would have left, having gotten scared.

On the other hand, there was this part that I liked that I wanted to put in that I didn't. A rewrite, perhaps? ;)

[firstofoct]

That's so like the Doctor! And I love with this we know that Rose anyways, has a happy ending to her story. Love it. I've been thinking about writing something where Eleven meets Rose when she's jumping universes, but I love that in your fic he came to see her. Again, marvelous! Rewrite? Not necessary! Love some angst! :)

[ever_neutral]

She spends the rest of the night crying, and she can't tell whether it's from heartbreak or happiness. She decides that it all feels the same.

Perfect ending. You angst queen. ;)

[madeelly]

Heee, thanks! I do love writing angst. xD

[light_frost]

Oh, how very heartbreaking! :( Poor Rose...although, it was beautiful when she and the Doctor danced together. How very lovely. :)

[madeelly]

Thank you so much! ♥

[facing_the_wind]

Oooh, I love this. There's such a Cinderella feel there. You can feel her emptiness and I love how there's touches of what people probably think of her in Pete's World with her being a little angsty and a little snippy. It's the tiny touches that make this really brilliant. And I ADORE that you can really believe Eleven would've figured out a way to pull this off-he likes to go back in time and shift things to where he'd want them, after all! :D

[madeelly]

I'm so glad you got the Cinderella vibe I was going for! ♥ And heee, yes. Eleven totally would do that! I can also see him being a bit thoughtless and not really giving Rose any hope. It's all about making things right for him.

Thank you so much for reading and leaving a lovely comment! ♥

[madeelly]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. ♥