[Fanfic] Forever lost, Forever gone][Miyavi/Kai][Miyavi/Melody][1/1][PG]

Nov 23, 2009 01:31

Title: Forever lost, Forever gone

Chapters: 1/1

Author: Madientsukimaru

Disclaimer: Oh yea, I own them, just like I own the Taj Mahal. Note the sarcasm there.

Genre: Angst

Rating: PG

Warnings: Angst

Pairing: Miyavi/Kai, Miyavi/Melodly

Summary: The ring on his slender, tattooed finger spoke of many things. Love and commitment, trust. But what it really was ( Read more... )

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pooobaihr November 23 2009, 17:42:22 UTC
I was wondering when someone was going to write this >.> ... I would have ... xD but I didnt...

This was nice work.. I can picture it all in my head..

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ashley_regret November 23 2009, 19:32:58 UTC
i really liked it, though it broke my heart ;_;
and i agree with pooobaihr, i was waiting for someone to write something like this, but you totally exceeded my expectations ;_;

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feelthefalling November 23 2009, 22:56:22 UTC
"As he turned around, he missed the look of utter heart break in both their eyes for a love that was forever lost and a love that would never be returned."

Firstly I loved this. Only the third one of these I've read and I just love how yours is written. It's not as in depth about everything as the other one I liked was but that just made it better in this situation. Sometimes short and simple is the best way to go. XD

And next... *FLAILS ARMS AROUND* *points to quote* What does that mean???

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ma_yu_ri November 26 2009, 12:37:27 UTC
recent Miyavi/Kai fics always break my heart.

mem'd. <3

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