Comments | madientsukimaru: [Fanfic][Sin][Kai/Rukii][Kai/??][1/1][NC-17]

madientsukimaru

[Fanfic][Sin][Kai/Rukii][Kai/??][1/1][NC-17]

Dec 05, 2009 00:43

Title: Sin

Chapters: 1/1

Author: Madientsukimaru

Disclaimer: Oh yea, I own them, just like I own the Taj Mahal. Note the sarcasm there.

Genre: Smut

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: Smut, rimming, unfaithfulness

Pairing: Kai/Ruki, Kai/?? [You decide who]

Summary: Kai hated how Ruki was right. No matter how hard he tried, he always came back and allowed himself to ( Read more... )

Comments 5

rukisheart December 5 2009, 09:39:21 UTC

Short and hot and really Good<3<3<3
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viciousfaye69 December 6 2009, 05:40:25 UTC

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keimaxwell December 6 2009, 12:24:59 UTC

Hot~

ex_fishisba December 6 2009, 12:48:07 UTC

I like the idea! I like Ruki as the manipulative seducer, sin itself! But I have questions? Can eyes with lenses turn darker shades? Why so many descriptions of their color and Ruki's hair color and style? What where they doing in some abandoned buliding in the middle of nowhere? Secret meeting place, shooting a video? I got the feeling that Ruki does this because he cares for Kai, that it isn't just sex in the end. Even if you didn't say it with words. If that is the case, I like that. Kai should dump whoever he is dating!

madientsukimaru December 6 2009, 15:39:28 UTC

Well, I don't think contacts can change shade but, I made it so his eyes were naturally that color. Some people have eyes that change shade with their mood.

For your second question, this is the hair style and, as you can see in the pic, not everything is the same color or done up in dreads.

As for why they're in a abandon buliding well, that's up to you. My take on it is they assassin and boss because that's what I had in mind while writing it.