Comments | madison3788: She Doesn't Even Know

madison3788

She Doesn't Even Know

Mar 18, 2006 01:50

Disclaimer: No...I don't own Grey's Anatomy. Wouldn't that be awesome?

Ok...so this came to me randomly. Some of you may be thinking how the heck could this happen? And honestly...I don't know. But it was different...and I like different...so I wrote it.

It's a MerDer fanfic....

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thoushaltkissme March 18 2006, 08:17:50 UTC

Ohh, I love it. Love, love, love it. I hope you do a second chapter, I'd love to read it. You're an excellent writer. :]

mhopeg March 19 2006, 16:54:20 UTC

I just needed to say, I love your icon. So true :)

thoushaltkissme March 19 2006, 22:04:49 UTC

Hahaha, thanks :] It's very true!

_forcemajeure_ March 18 2006, 17:25:42 UTC

That was pretty stellar.

truelove0526 March 18 2006, 20:24:06 UTC

Ok...so I gotta say...if you don't write a second chapter we might have to kidnap you and hold you hostage until it happens. So...

Seriously, though, this was wonderful. It really felt like it was something that could actually be going through Derek's head. Very impressive. Please write more soon.

madison3788 March 18 2006, 21:46:21 UTC

HAHHAHA! Well in that case..I'll DEFINITELY write a second chapter!! I really appreciate you saying it could be something that Derek was thinking...that's what I was really going for!! Thanks for reviewing!!

Honestly? leenoox March 19 2006, 03:59:10 UTC

I think it might be better left hanging, myself.

I liked it, although I got a bit confused by the pronouns at the beginning...

Re: Honestly? manaraki_syd March 19 2006, 11:59:21 UTC

I really enjoyed reading that.. Based on how we always seem to hear merediths POV come out in the show, i often wonder what is going through derek's head! ( As you do with guys!) one question.. whos baby is it? can't wait for chapter 2 ;-)

rocknromantic March 19 2006, 12:10:48 UTC

LOL@"(As you do with guys!)".. I couldn't agree more.

I loved it though, it's simple but beautiful.

- Mia.

Re: Honestly? madison3788 March 19 2006, 19:58:32 UTC

You mean is it Derek's baby? hahahhahhaha YES!!!!! :)

mhopeg March 19 2006, 16:52:13 UTC

Wow. That was very well-written. You took a scenario that should have seemed impossible and way out of left field and turned it into a moving story.

I love your Derek POV. And YES YES YES to a second chapter.