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[madmaddie]

Woo! My first post for Ficlets100. Enjoy.

Title: Forfeit.
Fandom: Naruto
Character/s: Hyuuga Neji/Nara Shikamaru
Prompt: (#064 Give Up)
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG.

Shikamaru hits the ground with enough force to leave him breathless.

“Give up.” Neji demands, hovering somewhere above him, pale hands pinning his own to the floor.

Comments

[ladyfiction]

Yes. I absolutely loved that last line. YES. XDD

[dying_in_drag]

Wow.

OMG.

LOVED IT <3333333

[penname_please]

If Shikamaru knew what the forfeit was, I'm sure he'd given up on the fight before it even began XD

Good work!