great stuffaussielatinaMarch 29 2009, 05:07:54 UTC
Hey there read your piece I actually really liked it sort of conjured up the thought of freemasonary in my mind or of that scene in Kubrick's "Eyes Wide Shut" which involved a sort of secret everlasting and ever-knowledgable society. Keep up the good work and be sure to add any more that you do am looking forward to seeing what Raef has to do...
Feedback - as requested!theresafApril 3 2009, 12:01:55 UTC
Hey! I thought your piece of prose was really interetsing. At first I thought it was sci-fi but then when I read the term such as "brethren" it came across as a cross between future and past. Was that your intention? Either way, it was an intriguing read, I felt as though I was reading a bladerunner/BNW piece meeting with historical fiction! Nice!
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read your piece I actually really liked it sort of conjured up the thought of freemasonary in my mind or of that scene in Kubrick's "Eyes Wide Shut" which involved a sort of secret everlasting and ever-knowledgable society. Keep up the good work and be sure to add any more that you do am looking forward to seeing what Raef has to do...
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