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[madradio921]

Bonsoir touts mes amies!

I'm sure you've all heard me talking about the Presidential Classroom camp I want to do this summer :)

I received the scholarship info, and have been working on the application for it.

They request an essay of one page long describing how participation in a Pres. Class. program will help you achieve your educational and

Comments

[elmo5]

very very good. i like it a lot. only thing i would change, last sentence, comma after the word "world" and before "I" since there is a natural pause there. well done sweetheart, i would make sure before you send it in, to print off the essay and have a few english teacers edit it, just to be on the safe side. but again, this essay is wonderful!

[karios]

*resists correcting your French*

Have I mentioned how great this essay is? And how bad it makes the rest of us look? :p
You'll blow 'em away. You overachiever you.