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mae_mae_muffin

Collision

Apr 26, 2009 15:55

The truth is that she likes the way he pins her arms to the wall and leaves her helpless against the ravishing crusade of his teeth-mouth-hands; that she is not a glass figurine underneath his palms, but instead an unconquered land, a realm now scuffed and worn by the countless battle-marches of his lips. He presses threats and kisses in equal ( Read more... )

where has my creativity gone?, recycled bits of crap, collision, etc., drabble, fanfiction, teen titans, starfire, red x

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sylver_eyes April 27 2009, 21:07:24 UTC

Oi; can say nothing coherent.

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Only thing is, Tamranians are like, THE MOST expressive and emotional creatures on the earth and bad things happen when they are suppressed, as we've seen? Wouldn't she not be able to stifle them like this, or at least have that have repercussions?

mae_mae_muffin April 28 2009, 02:00:36 UTC

Ooh, you're right, as usual. xD I never even thought about that! Must add that in later.

Oh, and also, I'm just about to send you an email with some /fantastic/ DC superheroes art I found on DA...so hold that thought :D

sylver_eyes April 28 2009, 03:47:34 UTC

FANTASTIC.

I replied to it, and I forgot to link you, but I want to show you where I've been lurking lately:

http://twilightsucks.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fangirls&action=display&thread=5175

This site amuses me; this thread terrifies me.

crabbieabbie May 28 2009, 08:08:49 UTC

Niiiiiiice. I like. o.o Even if Starfire is not my favorite character (you already know who is), the prose alone was more than enough to snag my attention and drag it all the way to the end. It sits a little strangely with me, because this is a characterization of Starfire rather different than the ones most often reconciled to my mind, but I am open to the possibilities, if for the quality of the writing itself alone.

And I'm still a sucker for the bad boy. Damn that x-marked-skull-mask-wearing thief.

...<.< And in case I managed not to be obvious, this is "Absentia" from fanfiction.net.

mae_mae_muffin May 29 2009, 03:05:04 UTC

First off: Crabbie Abbie. Niiice. :D

Second, (after jumping up and down squealing "Thank you! Thank you! :D") I definitely get what you mean with the characterization. For this piece, I basically raped and stole the version of Starfire that SylverEyes (on fanfiction.net) sometimes writes. Especially in her piece "Fall". But yeah, it's...different. I figure, Tamaranians are pretty intensely emotional - so while Star can take the punches, something she can't really deal with is loss.

Also, I figure I should just throw in there that I'm basically fainting and on my knees in awe over "Unfinished Business". Because that story just...just...rocks. Seriously. You /are/ a writer.