My first Fanfic in like, forever!
Title: None
Author: Maedae84
Genre: Angst-ish
Pairing: None, or up to you dicrestion
Rating: pg
Disclaimer: I don't own. Also this is my first fic in a decade, critiques are more than welcome.
Summary: Not long enough for one.
“Really, all those flashing lights hurt. What were they and why the hell won’t they go away?”
Those were the only thoughts I could think. What happened, where was I, and who is that person in the passenger seat? It doesn’t look like Saga, but if I am thinking correctly, he was the only person in the car with me.
“Tora!”
Who’s that, and how do they know my name? How did I get wherever here is?
“Tora, come on, speak to me!”
“Wha…what happened?”
“You’ve been in an accident. Where do you hurt?”
“I…don’t know. How’s Saga, and who are you? How do you know my name?”
“I’m a police officer, sir, and I found your wallet, I got your name out of that. Your passengers name is Saga?”
“Yes, how is he?”
“He’s unconscious. The paramedics will be here in a moment. Do you remember what happened?”
“No…” how can I remember what happened. The last thing I knew, me and Saga were leaving rehearsal, and were heading out to a bar for some drinks.” Now that I think of it, I do remember some lights swerving in front of me.”
I realized that sirens were getting closer to us now, must be the paramedics.
“Thank you. The medics are here now; they’re going to get both of you to the hospital.”
I faded out as I saw two men running to the car.
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Next time I wake up, I’m in a hospital room. I can tell how badly hurt I am now. I’m in pain everywhere. Particularly my leg, which I can see is in a cast. I look up and see Shou in the corner, he’s obviously been crying.
“Shou?”
“Tora, Oh my God, I was so worried. How are you feeling?”
“I hurt everywhere.”
“Do you want me to get a doctor?”
“No. How’s Saga?”
He hesitated here, and that makes me worry.
“Saga’s head hit the dashboard. It’s pretty bad, and he’s still unconscious. The doctors think he’ll wake up soon, but they aren’t sure of all the damage yet.”
“What happened?” I have to know, regardless. I don’t remember anything but the swerving lights.
“I’m not sure of much, besides that another driver was talking on their phone, and they drove into oncoming traffic, hitting you. Your car landed in a store. Went through the wall and everything.”
Wow, I didn’t realize it was that bad. “Can I see him?”
“Who, Saga?”
“Yeah.”
“He’s in ICU, and you’ll be on crutches for a while. I’ll let you know when he wake’s up though.”
“Thanks.”
“I’m going to go check on him now, but I’ll tell Hiroto and Nao that your awake, so be prepared for them.”
With that he left, and I just wanted to sleep again, but I couldn’t. Not only were Nao and Hiroto on their way, but I was so worried about Saga.
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It was the same bout of 20 questions with Hiroto, Nao just stood off to the side, looking scared. I started to get really tired, and I know they could tell, since they said they needed to go.
After they left, I started to drowse off. The last thing I remember thinking was that I hoped Saga would be alright.
Please let me know what I did wrong, or what I can do better.