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[maedbh]

Here be chapter four! Enjoy!

The night’s research had yielded no information about what might be happening to Vicki. With nothing turning up, the trio had given up late in the night and gone their separate ways.

Vicki had decided to take a look at the case file Mike had given her earlier that day; she was in no mood to even try sleeping and

Comments

[sindee1982]

Ouch! Harsh much? Let's admit it: there are times when Mike needs to be put into his place, but even I found myself wincing at the dialogue! Oh, and the latest turn of events? Definitely hinky. It's one thing to start saying exactly what's on UR mind, but its entirely different when you start breaking stuff with it. For some reason the phrase "The force is strong with this one," comes to mind ;) Great chappy!

[maedbh]

Aw, I know - even I felt sorry for Mike. But maybe they'll make friends again...;) And I agree with that - very appropriate phrase! Thanks! :)

OH! While I'm typing - I've got a 200-worder; d'you mind if I use your shiny new term?! Thought I'd ask, just to be sure...

[sindee1982]

Sure, be my guest! Maybe if we get enough people posting bites it'll become common place on LJ--that'd be cool ;)

[fitzsgirl]

Great dialogue between Vicki and Mike. Vicki is going to manage to alleniate everyone around her before this spell rubs off. Can't wait to read more.

[maedbh]

Thanks! Hopefully they'll solve it before it gets to that stage! ;)

[ravenboo]

UH oh, telekinetic much Vicki???.

[maedbh]

Hehe! Seems to be...

[ravenboo]

She'll be whacking people with that asp without even touching it LOL !! :D