Comments | maeglinyedi: The Price of Peace (HP/LV/SS, NC-17), Chapter 1

maeglinyedi

The Price of Peace (HP/LV/SS, NC-17), Chapter 1

Dec 15, 2011 00:39

Since I'm now 26k words in, and I've got the plot figured out (for the most part), I'll start posting it. I confess...I'm much too excited about this story to just sit on it while I finish writing it. Let me know what you think ( Read more... )

harry/voldemort/snape, hp_fic

Comments 6

fire_by_fire December 15 2011, 01:17:17 UTC

You don't even know how happy I'm right now. It was beautiful and well-written chapter. Honestly I was expecting everything but trying to find a way to make Harry immortal. I love how they have changed through these years and started to care about each other. Also I like the fact that everyone found something to do: Voldemort studies ancient magic, Severus still in love with ingredients and elixirs and Harry as writer - who would think? ;)

So we're going back to Hogwart? And Voldemort... I mean Joseph will be a new Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher? Well, it will be interesting :)

maeglinyedi December 15 2011, 11:15:32 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed this chapter. And yeah, when you've got a horcrux that can walk and talk, a priority would be to make sure that horcrux doesn't die, I reckon! ;-) Thanks for commenting!

aunty_marion December 15 2011, 12:40:38 UTC

There is NO WAY I am going to be able to read either 'Semblance' or this before I go away for Christmas. So I've got both open in separate tabs, so that I can dive in next month. Yum.

ariadneelda December 15 2011, 14:12:27 UTC

I really should have reread Semblance first because my memory of it is hazy, but really, I couldn't resist this now! Great first chapter, setting things up, and I loved how you weaved the exposition about the last ten years into the story without ever making it feel like exposition. (Not that you would.) It's awesome seeing these characters interacting again and I love that Voldemort still calls Harry "my little Horcrux." ;) Really, really enjoyed this. Man, I'd missed your writing!

Oh, and things aren't going to go very well in Britain, are they? ;)

maeglinyedi December 15 2011, 15:00:27 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad the exposition didn't stand out much, but I had to set things up a bit for the rest of the story to work. ;-) As for their trip to Britain...if everything went smoothly, it wouldn't be much fun, now would it? :D

morgana_fire December 23 2011, 04:28:52 UTC

OMG! I am so glad someone pointed out that you were doing a sequel to this! *squeeee*