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Sep 11, 2007 01:38

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It's possible your ash-scarred face
carries with it the barest hint of
the time when you

burst, gasping, through the
thin film of skin that covered
the honeygold shine of the
future and its careless promises
but

you fell
too far
too fast
.

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theburbank September 11 2007, 23:49:07 UTC
soo....this is a little cryptic.

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maestrotj September 12 2007, 00:51:43 UTC
It's supposed to give more the sense of a feeling rather than tell a specific story. It does apply to a facet of my life right now, though. Several facets.

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loversinferno September 12 2007, 07:37:45 UTC
Well whatever it is, we must hope for good things. =)

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