I need you tonight.

[magazhchi]

There’s always a particular song, lyrics or a poem which defines your life perfectly. Mine are -

‘Searching for my twin soul,
                  I have travelled a mile.
                 Breaking hearts on the go;
                Though it’s never mine! '

The moment I read it, I knew it belonged to me. It happens to me lot more times

Comments

[marlawentmad]

Society often tells us we "should" do relationships a certain way, but I do not agree with "shoulds." You make a lot of interesting and relatable points. I enjoy your word choices!

[magazhchi]

Thanks. I actually struggled while writing this because I couldn't get into the shoes of this character. I thought of writing in third person but then it wasn't giving me the satisfaction.
     I personally am a one relationship at a time person but then I also believe in 'to each his/ her own'
     Good to hear a positive feedback. Thanks again!

[messygorgeous]

Love it

[magazhchi]

Thanks! I am happy to read this comment of yours. It makes me feel accomplished. I struggled with the voice here , I wanted my character to be a smooth talker...also wanting him/her to flirt with the reader at the same time ( I don't know whether I could pull it off)
"I guess you just have to meet the one that challenges you enough to stay because you know there is something more they haven't revealed yet." 
Exactly! You explained it really well. Thanks again!

[rayaso]

It probably is the longest pickup line, especially compared to something like "hey babe, I like the way you move." It is like a dating warning sticker, and it is very revealing. Anyone who proceeds past this point certainly does so at their own peril! Very nicely done!

[magazhchi]

Ah! Finally someone read the tags *smiles*  "Dating warning sticker" is a cool way to describe this. Atleast the character is honest is all I can say. Thank you kindly!

[lordrexfear]

I feel like I want to respond with a long winded of "You want to know me. Well, here's my life story. After I finish in about 5 hours, then you decide if you still want to know me".

[magazhchi]

Er..well. That's what this pretty much was*smiles*

[devilz_workshop]

Interesting approach to the prompt. I quiet liked this.

[magazhchi]

Thank you kindly.