The Deadly Duel

[magazhchi]

Thousands of spectators thronged the stadium; many taking a journey of weeks together to reach the place of the duel. The Queen had challenged a novice archer ‘Lavanya’ who had smitten the King by her bravery. Rumors were that the girl was not even sixteen but had bravely fought the tiger to save The King. The King in return had announced to bestow

Comments

[kajel]

Excellent twist. Nicely done.

[magazhchi]

Thank you. Happy to know it worked for you.

[magazhchi]

Thank you. Happy to get such an amazing feedback. *smiles*

[lolaslaughter]

I was so into this story and then you put in that twist at the end!! It was wonderful and so unexpected!! I love the concept of the queen saving her by challenging her!!

[magazhchi]

Thank you kindly *smiles*I am happy to know this worked for you in all the ways I intended to.

[aresrising05]

Its good but it's constrained by the shortness needed for the competition, I'd like to see a longer version at some point.

[magazhchi]

That's encouraging to know. Will do that soon. Thank you. *smiles*

[karmasoup]

Well, I guess she ended both their suffering. ;-)

[magazhchi]

Indeed :D Thank you for reading and commenting.