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poems

Jan 18, 2005 19:15

So here are two poems I wrote for my English class this semester ( Read more... )

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xletdownx January 19 2005, 01:19:25 UTC

wow maggie those are incredibly good. i would say you sould read the first one. i like the second one but i like the first one more. good job!

magdalena_red January 20 2005, 01:16:24 UTC

thanks, I did end up reading the 1st one. I know you just like it cos it mentions Elliott Smith lol

xletdownx January 20 2005, 04:05:16 UTC

you are just as burned as me
some things
were never meant to be recycled

and this fantasy world
is smothering us
spineless soldiers
petty little pawns
clap clap clap
and we all know it
some way or another

actually that was my favorite part, though i did enjoy the elliott smith reference, i used to spell his name with one t cuz i didnt know how to spell it right lol