STUFF. Mostly poetry.

Jan 07, 2009 15:23



A face
With eyes, nose, mouth, dimples.
Simple gestures, imperfections that make in unique.
A slightness to admire;
Shaped for attraction, for speech
To sing and love.
A face
That no one will ever  forget.
Burning into a man's memory;
The face.

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valeria_15 January 9 2009, 19:18:07 UTC
Hey you! I really enjoy your poems :D you really should write more.

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fyrestorming February 28 2009, 13:06:42 UTC
I am so sorry that I took so long to get to this Tia, I brought it on myself that I missed out on these sweet, short poems. I really like all three of them ^^, they have something, I'm looking for a good word, it'll be that word prefixed by very, ums... is there a word that mixes the meanings of charming and spirited? Hehehe, I can't think of one XD, but, these are very that, they ring with an honest, genuine appreciation of their subjects, as if each one just says "This is a good thing, and that alone merits saying so, without any assistance from clever rhyming". I enjoyed them, thanks :).

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