Comments | magenta_storm: Sunrise

magenta_storm

Sunrise

Dec 23, 2009 20:36

Fic: Sunrise
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine, belongs to Paramount
A/N: Acadamy era. Un-beta'd, any mistakes are my own fault.

( Sunrise )

reboot, fluff, slash, xi, star trek, nc-17, fanfic, kirk/mccoy

Comments 8

syredronning December 23 2009, 10:36:49 UTC

Nice fluff to wake up to!

The image of them going to swim and then be all over each other in the water is hot :)

magenta_storm December 24 2009, 00:29:05 UTC

Thank you.

Yes, I know. I got that idea into my head and built the rest of the fic around it. I'm glad it worked out.

claudia_nic December 23 2009, 10:56:17 UTC

I love the build up in this. How at first you don't know much about the fact that they are so attracted to each other but the farther in you get, the clearer it becomes. And the midnight carnival visit is just so cute.

magenta_storm December 24 2009, 00:41:59 UTC

Thank you. That's what I was going for and I'm glad you thought it worked.

I thought it might be stretching the imaginiation a bit to think that the place would be open at midnight, but meh. It was a cute idea so I did it anyway XD.

asakochan December 23 2009, 11:40:22 UTC

Silly boys. :3 You were always meant to be! Flirting and squirming. x3 Well done well done.

magenta_storm December 24 2009, 00:57:23 UTC

Yes, silly boys indeed!

Thank you for commenting.

kilala10 December 24 2009, 04:47:25 UTC

LUV

weepingnaiad December 26 2009, 16:57:14 UTC

Very nice!