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Concrit Post
Hello, lovelies.
I'm putting this post here so you can give me constructive criticism for Kurogane at Discedo. I'm always looking to improve the way I play my
characters, so I encourage you to drop a comment here if you see anything off!
All comments are screened and anon is turned on.
Thank you! -
Info || Kurogane
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.49. [Stuck] - AUDIO
Oi.
Someone needs to get the girl out. She's been in there three days now, goddammit.
[Kurogane himself has been stuck since yesterday and has seen his mother more than once. Don't be surprised if he's a little on edge 8(] -
.48. [Return] - VIDEO
...hn.
[He slowly starts remembering how everything works, looking grouchily at the controls.]
Oi. How long's it been? -
.47. [Atropos]
[COUGH HACK COUGH]
Dammit... Never got sick before this damn place.
[more coughing.]
Someone's gonna need to watch the girl... can't risk her catchin' this...
[Aaand more coughing as he stops the transmission.] -
.46. [Daddy]
Oi.
Who's this "Daisuke" kid?
I need to talk to 'im.
[He only sounds a little menacing.] -
.45.
[As the device turns on, it's buzzing and skittering across the floor. There is a moment of silence as the picture focuses on the ceiling, and then it gets picked up by a rather tired-looking ninja.]
Tch...
[He puts it back on the table and crosses his arms, sighing grouchily.]
Of all the goddamn people y'had to take... had to be him.
Idiots ( Read more... ) -
.44. [Lessons]
Oi. Now that that's all over, I'll be starting swordfighting back up. I need to know who's going to be there and how much you know about it.
Tch. Damn crazies. -
.43. [Supplies]
Tch...
It's about time.
[This is his way of saying thanks for the supplies, scientists.]