Fic: A Promise Fated to be Broken

[maggy_97]

Title: A Promise Fated to be Broken
Author: Maggy_97
Pairing: Adam/Tommy
Rating: G
Wordcount: 980
Warning: None

Notes: Thanks go to the wonderful Thrace_Adams for being my beta and my friend. She's doing a great job!

Disclaimer: This is a fictional story based on real people. The events in this story are entirely fictional and all mine. Adam and Tommy are

Comments

[ratbert71]

I love the inner struggle and then the final breaking and giving in. Very nice.

[maggy_97]

That was exactly what I was trying to get across. I'm glad it worked! :) Thank you for your comment!

[ratbert71]

Ha!!

I love your avi. I took that picture at Witchita. He totally rocked that hair extension. \o/

[maggy_97]

Oh, cool! Yeah, it looked great, thanks for taking that pic! :)

[kelly318]

Really nicely written.

[maggy_97]

Thank you! :)

[becca112971]

wow very powerful and raw. you really nailed the intensity f that. hugs you are awesome

[maggy_97]

Awww .. thank you so much! :)

I can't tell you how much I love it, that you use the words powerful, raw and intensity to describe it! That's exactly what I was trying to get across.

[eowyn_for_adam]

Beautiful and powerful.
The way you write it (and the way it feels in real life, too) it's as if these boys are just INEVITABLE!

[maggy_97]

Inevitable, indeed! I'm not sure about real life, though, but I am glad you felt that in my writing. :)

Thank you for commenting!

[thrace_adams]

Look at all your shiny comments - and the most common word = intense. :) *HUGS*

[maggy_97]

*beams* I love that this is word they think of when reading it. :)