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magic_marker

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Jun 13, 2003 23:57

You push me down to make an impression ( Read more... )

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magic_marker June 13 2003, 23:56:58 UTC

Please note that not all words ending in tion or sion rhyme. For example, masturbation doesn't rhyme with infection.

sonnet? myturtleflys June 14 2003, 20:59:03 UTC

i noticed the iambic pentanmeter... very cool, but i don't think it's a sonnet, or is it? hmmm. what is it? or is it anything? i love how redundant i can be. the whole silly putty thing is awesome. but the whole thing casts an eerie (definitely not the right word... but im going to use it anyway). i love it.

Re: sonnet? myturtleflys June 14 2003, 21:00:47 UTC

vibe, i forgot vibe... hehe, oh well.

Re: sonnet? magic_marker June 23 2003, 11:53:51 UTC

It's a double ballade. It can be any uniform length, but I like iambic pentameter, so I went with that.

Woo.

anonymous June 15 2003, 00:06:54 UTC

dude, what about the goat?