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Jun 24, 2003 12:06

It wasn't a relationship really
It was more of a love affair
Between your car, your cologne, and me

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rampagingcarrot June 24 2003, 12:30:45 UTC
intriguing ;-)

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magic_marker June 24 2003, 19:49:08 UTC
Not really a poem... not really finished yet either.

Thanks for the compliment?

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rampagingcarrot June 25 2003, 05:41:30 UTC
I wasn't commenting on it as a poem, more the idea...and the last line actually, I was fascinated by the last line. It probably has something to do with me not wearing a cologne nor having a car. ;-)

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magic_marker June 25 2003, 11:13:29 UTC
Hmm.

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aphoenixrain June 25 2003, 19:33:20 UTC
Just makings sure you saw that the topic was tossed to you on _pip_ ....

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anonymous July 6 2003, 18:54:31 UTC
psh

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Incredible psquelly October 16 2003, 09:51:52 UTC
These entries are incredible. I think this is my favorite. Reminds me a lot of a poet whose name escapes me at the moment. Wish I could remember.

The only poem I can remember is:

Love comes and goes
And often it has paused
Then comes back to see
The damage it has caused.

May I friend you?

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Re: Incredible magic_marker October 16 2003, 15:53:06 UTC
Go ahead. Thanks for the compliment! *friends you back*

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kaos October 16 2003, 10:11:42 UTC
I like this *smile*

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