Comments | magic_mind: One Long, Sexless Week

magic_mind

One Long, Sexless Week - Part 1

Aug 13, 2004 14:34

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24_centuries August 13 2004, 15:56:50 UTC

This was a very cute and funny story overall =D Loved Draco and Harry teasing each other and the shower scene was just great =D

One discrepancy -- In the beginning you say that Harry works for the Ministry chasing Death Eaters. Later on, he's the Seeker for Puddlemere. Just wondering about it =)

Thanks for sharing this =)

magic_mind August 14 2004, 06:38:57 UTC

Glad you liked it!

Thank you so much for noticing the error. I didn't have anyone to beta this. I'll fix it ASAP.

Thanks!

viridescence August 13 2004, 16:46:29 UTC

Woah! *sweats* That was amazingly hot! *pants* I loved every bit of this...Harry teasing Draco, Draco dancing, Harry exercising, the shower scene... OMG! And the ending in the cupboard! Dude, too hot. I need a cold shower...

magic_mind August 14 2004, 06:41:19 UTC

Thanks!

I was afraid the ending would be a little anti-climatic since I'd spent so much time writing the five sections before it. I'm glad I did okay.

BTW, I took many a cold shower in between writing this. :-)

viridescence August 14 2004, 08:36:31 UTC

It definitely worked out okay...

BTW, I took many a cold shower in between writing this.
LOL, I completely understand what you mean! I've had to do that several times when writing some of my more steamy ficlets... *grin*

magic_mind August 14 2004, 13:04:31 UTC

*snickers* I thought I was the only one...:-)

P.S.-Your icon is beautiful. Did you make it yourself?

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^o^ lifelessmidget August 13 2004, 18:53:59 UTC

OMGF i must have cracked myself laughing!
this was BRilliant!
i loved the whole plot idea and all the witty comment
fantabuluos piece of writing!!

Re: ^o^ magic_mind August 14 2004, 06:43:43 UTC

I tried so hard to make this funny, thank you thank you thank you!

serenitas August 14 2004, 05:52:28 UTC

I liked this a great deal, it was hilarious, adorable and hot. May I add it to my archive please? It's a selective H/D slash archive, you can find the link to it in my userinfo if you want to check it out. I would love to add this to the collection.

magic_mind August 14 2004, 06:45:01 UTC

OMG!

This is the first time anyone has asked to archive my fiction! I would be honored!

danbi August 15 2004, 06:28:46 UTC

I love sexual tension and this story was full of it. Thanks for sharing - I would comment more elaborately but I'm rather tired at the moment. Please know that I did enjoy it.

magic_mind August 15 2004, 13:44:44 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

I'm crazy for fics with a lot of sexual tension too. *grins* Does it show?