The Love Below - Chapter Fifteen

[magic_mind]

Title: The Love Below
Characters: L/Mello/Near; this chapter is Mello-centric
Rating: M
Word Count: ~5,000
Spoilers: For now, Mello and Near's real names. Possibly others along the way.
Summary: Mello and Near are competing for L's title. Are they also competing for his love?

Comments

[magic_mind]

^_^; Yeah...this update was ridiculous. But don't worry, this fic will never be abandoned. Never ever ever.

*gasps* You're right - Watari IS a gentler version of Dumbledore. I never considered that. It's weird, I feel like I KNOW Watari, despite having like...two lines from him in canon.

Thank you so much for the kind words!

[ink_tree]

Oh hooray, I'm so glad this was updated.

“I’m the goddamn Mello. I’ll find a way.” ahhh Mello I love you.

Also Mr. Wammy quoting Hamlet, oh boy.

Thanks so much for the update! :D

[magic_mind]

^_^ The next update won't be like this. Unless I revert to the epic failage that the past few weeks have been, that is.

Isn't Mello just awesome? And yeah, Mr. Wammy and Hamlet just go together in my mind. Couldn't tell you why. :)

Thank YOU for commenting. I really appreciate it.

[mizzshy]

Nyahhhh~~~ finally a new chapter. :D

I can't wait to see where this is going and I love how Mello reacts to feeling immature. Mr Wammy is pretty much exactly as I pictures him. I like how he makes Mello realise that L has feelings about all this and everything... It feels very realistic as a conversation too.

Looking forward to the next. :)

[mizzshy]

That was meant to be "pictured" not "pictures"... ^^;

[magic_mind]

Ah! Sorry it's taken me so long to reply!

I'm very glad that Mr. Wammy worked for you - I could see him so clearly in my mind while I was writing. :3

Thank you so much for the kind words!

[mizzshy]

No worries. :)

He's simultaneously adorable and wise... It's fantastic. x3

You're welcome; I look forward to the next chapter. :D