d.gray-man: Fragments

[magical_poof]

Title: Fragments
Prompt: #10: Taking Over [[ main table]]
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Allen Walker (and the 14th, technically)
Genre: general weirdness and angst and disjointed rambling
Warnings: Hm... Spoilers for 14th Noah, I suppose?
Disclaimer: I do not own d.gray-man, nor the Battle Hymn of the Republic lyrics
Summary: "Dreams were

Comments

[loveless3173]

Oh cool~ i really liked it!! will you be continuing it? Its so cool!! Good work!

[magical_poof]

Thank you! I probably won't be continuing it unless I get a burst of inspiration, which would probably only happen if something happens in the manga... which is on hiatus ;____;

And honestly, if I write anything, it'd probably be like a side-story to this or something. XD

[loveless3173]

ugh! -_-'' don't remind me... *weep* -sob-
A side story would be awesome! like... after Allen "Losses" his mind to the 14th or something?... haha if so that would be so cool. i really liked where your story could take (fictional) D.Gray-man! lol...
i like your writing style! Do you have a Fan Fic.net Account?

[magical_poof]

Well, if I ever get that burst of inspiration, I'll write a side story... We shall see :)

I do have a ff account (http://www.fanfiction.com/~magicalpoof) but I haven't posted anything on it in ages (and there's nothing on it from dgm) -- you're better off checking out my journal and its tags.

But to be honest, this was a really different style from my usual, so you'll probably be dissappointed >__>;

[mittens_220]

I love this fic. I liked the disjointed way you wrote it because it fits the process of Allen losing himself.

It was so sad when Allen started losing his memory and all the questions he asked himself just seems to have no answer.

You did a really good job at writing this.

[magical_poof]

Thank you! I felt all artistic and stuff when I finished. It's probably one of my best fics in a while.

Those little doubts can drive me crazy. Like, was that mole on my arm always there and I never noticed it? XD Anyway, I'm glad you liked my fic!

[kowaiki]

I like it. Allen is in so much pain and confusion, yet no one seem to be able to comfort him properly. It is so heartbreaking.

[magical_poof]

Thank you! Poor Allen, he suffers a lot ;__; Anyway, I'm glad I could convey that sort of feeling! I always feel good when I'm able to create a proper mood :)

[iris_irin3]

This fic is amazing!
The way you wrote how Allen lost himself bit by bit was very good, it's quite in depth. Your writing is very unique.

[magical_poof]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! This is a new style for me, so I'm glad people seem to like it :)

[jenniyah]

This is a great fanfic.

I wish more people wrote about allen's memories being invaded with teh 14th's and what'd happen after :)

Hope you are inspired for a sequel :)

[magical_poof]

I know! I wish more people would write about it too! These kinds of fics are my favorites! XD

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it!