Full Metal Alchemist: Where You Left Off

[magical_poof]

Title: Where You Left Off
Rating: G - PG
Characters/Pairings: Alphonse, with bits of other characters
Genre: Angst-ish, General.
Warnings: Ahh… I suppose end of the (anime) series spoilers? Not really, though, because it’s just… Ahh… Nevermind. You decide if you want to read it.
Disclaimer: I do not own Full Metal Alchemist.
Summary: “It was the

Comments

[kawaiisporkmage]

Lovely fic, really lovely, but I don't think the last line (Goodnight, Al.) is necessary. It seems a bit repetitive.

I really like this, though. It's in character, and I can imagine him being a pillow-thief. *sniffle*

[magical_poof]

I didn't like the end line much either. I thought it was a bit awkward when I went back and reread it... But it had been in my original idea, though, admittedly, this turned out waaay different... >_>

[chrstphrl]

Lovely work. You really capture Al's sadness and emptiness beautifully.

[magical_poof]

Gracias! Al's a depressing little bugger, isn't he? ;_;

[tempest_strife]

AWWWE!!!

;_;

Dude I'm so trying not to... to late. I cried.

You exactly captured what I felt Al would feel... wich means a lot to me, since I roleplay him in Fullmetal Folly. I played with the idea of whether he's want that extra bed to remain there or not... I chose the idea of "parental" intervention and the bed being removed. *shrug* But yeah... You moved me!! ;_;

[magical_poof]

Thanks a lot! ^_^ An actual Al-psyche-studier-type-person liked it. Huzzah! I suppose the older peeps might have moved it out, but then the room would be extra empty! Poor Al! ;_;

[lilang_luha]

honey, did i ever tell you how much i love alphonse?

OMFG! This makes me want to hug and mother him. (and I'm not the nurturing type!) XO

[magical_poof]

Wow... Well, thanks! ^_^

I'd written hundreds of half-finished drabbles and thought up millions of ideas, but only post the ones I think I've gotten just right. And this is the one (ring to rule them all... XD) that passed my horrendous test of self-loathing.

[lilang_luha]

LOL! the one eh?

I understand the feeling. I get plot bunnies up my butt, but when it comes down to it, only one or two I really feel are good to post and finish.

[magical_poof]

I know, seriously. >_> I've been working on a military/Lab 5 fic, but now I'm making myself wait until the arc is over so I can keep it as accurate as I can... Poops, because I'll probably have given it up by then and started something else...

[littleduchess]

That's so sweet... poor Al! Why do the good always suffer? *huggles*

[magical_poof]

They suffer and die young and are enternally doomed until the end of time...

Because they're so good that god (moody, spiteful person he is) gets jealous and smites them. :D

And because Al's a Elric and Elrics always suffer. Except Envy. And maybe Dante. But in the manga Elric is Trisha's name... I dunno about the anime... Hmmm...

[littleduchess]

Either that or god just can't wait to have a teaparty with them. That's why the evil live so long (Dante- 400 years!)- he can't be bothered to deal with them.

[magical_poof]

But evil people are always so muuch happier... Always laughing and smiling and in such a good mood... Much better company at tea parties.