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magical_poof

Full Metal Alchemist: Remembrance

Jun 13, 2006 12:41

Title: Remembrance
Rating: G - PG
Characters/Pairings: Winry-centered, mostly one-sided EdxWin
Genre: Angst-ish, a little romance, general, character study.
Warnings: Umm… If you didn’t know about the deaths of Trisha and Winry’s parents… Then go finish reading/watching before starting on fanfiction…
Disclaimer: I do not own Full Metal Alchemist.
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Comments 36

winter_ruins June 13 2006, 16:54:15 UTC

**Wibble** =P The tense switches were a little distracting, but all in all a beautiful piece of work. Great characterization, in my eyes.

magical_poof June 13 2006, 16:56:52 UTC

I know, I absolutely died on the tenses. I hated how I couldn't get them right... But whenever I tried to change it all to one tense, some parts didn't sound as good. Gah!

Thanks, though! ^_^ One day, I'll be able to write from Ed's POV... One day... -sighs-

mika9101 June 13 2006, 20:09:16 UTC

Very nicely done! ^^

magical_poof June 13 2006, 20:16:44 UTC

Thank you very much! ^_^

december_zephyr June 13 2006, 20:20:44 UTC

Ah, what a sweet little chocolate to add a squeak to my day. ^_^; Yes, I squeaked. I didn't mind the tense switches; it's a beautiful piece regardless. Winry's perception of him made so much sense. Hah, their love is doomed to be different from the traditional kind.

Thank you for sharing! ^_^ It was wonderful.

magical_poof June 13 2006, 20:28:50 UTC

Thank you! -spazzes- I made someone squeak! XDD I realized just now that I've done that before... And it really scared me when I did it, too... :P

The tense switches annoy me, though... Grrr...

I love angsty romance. But it can't be too angsty, because I'm picky and be like, "dude, get over it already!" If it goes on too long, or if they're angsting over stupid things, like not being able to open a jar of pickles... >_>

Ack. I'm ranitng again.

moeshmoe June 13 2006, 22:28:42 UTC

I'm thinking maybe personal experience might have me biased, (grrr... some people dont know when to stop complaining about food!) but I think this is a beautiful piece. Nicely written with really interesting insight on Winry's part.

<3 Love for you.

magical_poof June 14 2006, 02:59:48 UTC

XDD Thanks! I don't really complain about food, but I'm really picky and refuse to try something even if I will probably like it... >_>

<3 Love for you back. :D

iscah_rambles June 13 2006, 23:34:33 UTC

*lol*

That's great. I love the ending. "The eggs are burning."

magical_poof June 14 2006, 03:00:50 UTC

XD It was such angsty piece before I wrote that, actually... Bah. We all need to lighten up a bit. Not all of FMA is angst, right?