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lleucu
June 18 2006, 20:05:42 UTC
between the character talking and the action? Not sure if I follow do you mean like start a new line when someone speaks, or something else?
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word_waterfall
June 18 2006, 20:07:24 UTC
for example:
Harry crossed the floor, and looked at Hermione.
"What?" he asked, in response to her perplexed expression. She shook her head.
"Nothing," she replied.
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lleucu
June 18 2006, 20:08:35 UTC
yeah, that's what I thought you meant, thanks :D
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Harry crossed the floor, and looked at Hermione.
"What?" he asked, in response to her perplexed expression. She shook her head.
"Nothing," she replied.
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