YAYZ!!

[magickslash]

http://www.sbs.com.au/whatson/index.php3?tvsch=1

And to celebrate, here's a new fic.

Rating: PG this chapter. But it hots up as it goes along

Comments

[mjzjewel]

This is really interesting. I'm looking forward to reading what happens next.
It's always great to have a new long fic!

[magickslash]

Thanks! I don't know if this will rival SOTWOM in length, but there's a lot more to come.

[mjzjewel]

It doesn't have to be that long. As long as a fic has more than just one part then I'm happy lol

[colleendetroit]

YAYZ!!

WOW, you must REALLY like World News Australia...hehehe ;o)

Chris was sure his flesh would be doughy from a lifetime of easy living. Also, he had a ball-shaped head, and his mouth was too shapeless, the lips too thin. Chris preferred a mouth that could pout.

I LOVE how Chris didn't give Toby a second thought until he actually sat there and watched him. In fact, it sounds like he wasn't attracted at all at first...interesting!

Beecher paused. Chris thought he saw a flicker in the lawyer’s eyes, an awareness that the other man was crossing some boundary. Chris was pleased; buttoned-down or not, Beecher had played this game before.

I love how this is going...Chris turning on the tease and Toby possibly recognizing it.

What he really wanted was someone he’d have to pursue, seduce, someone who’d make him want it by keeping it from him, someone who’d really test his powers of persuasion. Someone like the creamy-skinned, buttoned-down blond lawyer he’d just left.

Ooooooh, this sounds promising!! Can't wait to read more!

[magickslash]

Uh, I probably should have mentioned you have to scroll down to the evening's viewing. They stopped screening Oz over a year ago down here in the middle of S5.

"I LOVE how Chris didn't give Toby a second thought until he actually sat there and watched him. In fact, it sounds like he wasn't attracted at all at first...interesting!"

Thanks! :) I was trying to guess how Chris would have reacted to Toby if he'd met him before Oz had worked it's magic.

[colleendetroit]

Uh, I probably should have mentioned you have to scroll down to the evening's viewing. They stopped screening Oz over a year ago down here in the middle of S5.

LOL Oh no, I saw it! I was just pulling yer leg! heehee

Thanks! :) I was trying to guess how Chris would have reacted to Toby if he'd met him before Oz had worked it's magic.

Yeah, that's interesting! Generally A/U fic has them falling head over heels like love at first sight (I'm even guilty of it, lol) but I like the way you made him blase about Beecher. I like the slow build up to the realization that he might actually *dig* Toby. =o)

[alinewrites]

Very nice... I'm waiting for more.

[magickslash]

Thanks, Aline. :) More on the way.

[aswanargent]

B/K fic! *is happy*

[magickslash]

*is flattered* :D

[luci_2]

Looking forward to the next chapters.
Can't wait to see what the boys are doing, when there's no OZ to tie them down.

[magickslash]

Thanks. :) They're in for a wild ride, that's for sure. Especially poor Toby...